Feelings of my heart pt 1

by Boundless   May 3, 2007


The Question

This Feeling
I felt a lot
Since I met you
Since I first laid eyes on your beauty
Nothing could change this feeling
These feelings I have for you
I think it may be
But I must be careful
What if you don't feel the same
What if you laugh
Should I tell you
What will happen
How can I do this
I can't
I wont
No I must
My hand gets sweaty
My legs feel like they will give in
My jaw was clenched
And my heart almost stopped as I said those words
But the relief
Of this when you say them back

©2007 Joseph Lawson

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  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Awww... i love this one. very very sweet. i gotta love the ending. we are alway scared if the person we love the most doesnt love us back the same. aww.. just sweet. keep up the love pieces. you are a natural in them.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by azii

    Wonderful job! I love it. Very sweet and full of love. 5/5
    "And my heart almost stopped as I said those words
    But the relief
    Of this when you say them back"
    ^^ My fav lines. Kep up the great job.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by danielle

    OMG this was so WONDERFUL!!! it was reall good and beautiful and i loved it keep up the good work great job 5/5 ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    This is really beautiful! i love it. great job. 5/5

    xo kisses xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a good poem. There are a couple mstakes in it like: you need to take out all of the ' as it has gone funny. 'Should tell you' should be 'should I tell you'. in te fourth line of the poem it should be 'layed'. Apart from them it was a good poem. 5/5

    Kalee

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