Lies

by Perfectflaw   May 4, 2007


I am still working on this poem but i would like some feedback and imput. This is still the rough draft.

I see you there
Laughing at me
Because I believed all your lies
That you said so frequently

There were so many
I couldnt keep them straight
But the one that hurt the most
Was the one that made my heart break

The one that hurt so bad
Was when I said, "I love you"
you lied to my face
when you said, "I love you too"

How could you do that?
How could you say it?
That I meant something to you
When I didn't mean shit

So now I'm sitting here
Smiling like a moron
Pretending to be happy
So no one catches on

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ravi

    Its nice attempt..
    U may somewhere ask.. why did you do it?

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This is really good. I think you're doing an awsome job so far. Keep it up. Shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very nice... enjoyed reading it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow i think its good, very good. i think you should end it though by saying how you feel towards him now after putting you through that? just a suggestion show you are powerful and have control over this xxx well done great job xx

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