Tulips are better

by firexdancer   May 4, 2007


Roses are red,
so gorgeous as well,
but roses have thorns,
and the wounds start to swell.

roses are beautiful,
but their poison is strong,
a web of black blood,
that catches your song.

roses are divine,
yet beauty isn't always from up above,
why don't people understand they are a symbol of hate,
but they are used for love.

roses are theives,
a stealer of hearts,
yet you can't feel the pain,
until the breaking starts.

roses are alive,
touch cold as snow,
numbing your mind,
stopping your flow.

roses are killers,
but when crushed in the dust,
now a message of pain,
once a symbol of lust.

roses are bewitching,
even as a corpse in the ground,
because vampires they are,
in the grave a new one will be found.

roses are red,
you say that is a fact,
but when you look closely,
roses are black.

roses are heartbreakers,
flowers floating like feather,
but when my tears sparkle in their leaves,
tulips are better.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like few lines in this one but rest of this piece is great. Metaphors that you used are excellent and it is very deep. It has goo message, I enjoy reading it.

  • 16 years ago

    by So Wrong its Right

    This poem was very well written. It has a very catchy title. Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    The title of this poem was god, i liked the way you used fairly simple vocab in this one. As the roses are red theme is fairly simple anyway. I loved it hun

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Roses are beautiful,
    but their poison is strong,
    a web of black blood,
    that catches your song."

    wow so much power, perfectly written, excellent flow, brillant show of emtions, and amazing word choice. It spoke to my soul and painted many vivd pictures in my mind, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Amazing poem. Realistic but yet not all the way still leaves room for the imagination. Great job.

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