Chances Taken

by MyDevotion   May 6, 2007


Would you stop my heart
hold my hand and never part
talk to me late at night
never let us get into a fight,

Come to see me all the time
answer my call, on the drop of a dime
cherish every moment together
never let me fall under the weather,

I met you once
but for some reason I have this hunch
that your all ive wanted and more
the girl to open that emotional door,

Your more beautiful than all the rest
a person you can really consider the best
have the eyes of an angel, bright and blue
If only I could tell you, if only you knew,

Id love to get to know you
hold your hand, know it was true
look you in the eyes, ready to speak
tell you how I feel, as my legs get weak,

You have a place in my heart
a friendship, but more soon to start
give me a chance, see me again
I promise, I'm better than them.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor Loves Fishes

    I loved this poem it was very good and true, but i have to agree the rhyming was a little rocky. But every thing else was perfect!! really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    The rhyming seems kind of forced.
    Even if it doesn't rhyme
    And it has a good message in it
    It would turn out into a wonderful poem.
    But it seems the flow is kind of rocky in this poem...
    I'm sorry to say.
    I will give you a 4/5.
    If you want me to vote
    PM me.
    If you do not.
    Then don't :]

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awww, very sweet and beautiful!
    The poem was flawless I couldn't
    find not one mistake. The flow was
    beautiful and the poem was penned
    very well. God Bless 5/5
    <3tay(^_^)

  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabetta

    Great job, I can relate to this poem. I understand exactly what you're saying. 5/5

    ~Lizzie~