by MyDevotion May 6, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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Would you stop my heart |
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I loved this poem it was very good and true, but i have to agree the rhyming was a little rocky. But every thing else was perfect!! really good |
by Startle Me
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The rhyming seems kind of forced. |
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Awww, very sweet and beautiful! |
by Elizabetta
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Great job, I can relate to this poem. I understand exactly what you're saying. 5/5 |