by MyDevotion Apr 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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Walking in the rain |
by Tammie
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This is really unique, I thought. We all have those people that stab us in the back, you wrote about it well. The rhyming was well written, the vocab was appropriate for the poem and made great imagery. You are great at that. 5/5 |
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Very nice poem! The ending was strong like you said. Well, You did a good job!. God Bless 5/5 |
by Nikki
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I likedd itt |
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Hey, |