Glistening Drops of Perpetual Sorrow

by Hatori   May 7, 2007


Each glistening drop of this pouring rain,
Reminds me of that cold, dark day,
When so many tears were shed from my eyes,
And my poor weak body seemed to have died.

You had felt my terror,
And knew with fright,
That the only way to survive that night,
Was to sacrifice your very life.

You grabbed me with one fluid motion,
And flung your arms around me.
The feeling was simply a dream,
Until the consequences were finally seen.

Your motionless body was all that remained,
And the glistening drops of the pouring rain.

The way you died,
Because of me,
Is the reason for these horrid dreams,
Where the murderer returns,
With a stained red sword,
You huddled on the ground,
Covered in dark blood.

In these nightmares,
He strikes once more,
And I lay on the ground,
Glad that it wasn't you.

Each glistening drop of this pouring rain,
Reminds me of that cold, dark day,
When so many tears were shed from my eyes,
And I truly wish that I had died.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    .. soo deep .. and yet sooo powerful.. I loved every word, every line, and yet ur poem.. and your feelings that you have put into this poem.. very amzing job.. I loved...it .. your a amzing writer and I hope you never forget that.. because it pure talent.. pure talent which is your gift.. and I hope you never forget that.. good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was si heartbreaking to read...and yet so beautifully written.
    The imagery you used in this created vivid pictures, flow was good throughout the entire poem and the word choice was a joy to read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Inside He only wants to hurt me

    Each glistening drop of this pouring rain,
    Reminds me of that cold, dark day,
    When so many tears were shed from my eyes,
    And my poor weak body seemed to have died.

    this is such a powerful and very emotional first phrase. i love it. throughout this poems i couls imagin everything. great work5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    Wow, this is soooooo good...
    i liked a lot your use of adjectives...it made the poem so much better...
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow the description situation, sadness of love, depth, choic of words all amazing and made me depressed, i imagined it all, 5/5 hope you read one of mine.

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