That was kool man there dont seem to be that many guys on here and the ones that are cant really write to well ya know.

"This poem is for a girl who lights up the world to me,
and when around, makes everything else a blur to me,
she makes me feel like the luckiest guy on earth,
and shows me this life of love, and what it's worth"

^^That stanza is freaking beutiful! I do remember you OF COURSE!!! You're still at it I see...beautiful write! You make your feelings pop out in this one and that is what it's all about...NICE WRITE!!!!!!!!!

Keep in touch!!!

Nice

Wow I wish someone would write to me with such passion like you did.

Very nice, love.
i love how it expresses the simplist forms of young love. :)
keep up the good work!
~TrueLover~

Awww, that was good, hun.

Amazing poem! this is really good.. it made me smile, and makes me think of my boyfriend, because it sounds like something that he'd write. You did an amazing job, and i wouldn't change anything about it. I'll bet that she cried when you showed this to her! lol, i know i would! keep it up! :]

Awwww... this is so sweet!!!
i really like the emotion you put into it.. :)
She is a very luck y girl :)
<3
XxAshleyxX

Wow, i haven't a wonderful poem like this in a while

romantic, deep emotions, passionate, cute and wonderful

i love it
to my favorite

Aw so romantic! i hope you let her read it in know she would love it any girl would : ) 5/5 <33

Beautiful...i love it

Amazing as always...5/5

Words can't describe the things I want to tell you about this poem. Nothing negative tho, just the POSITIVES :) :) :) :) :) :)