Moonlight

by Hey Brittknee   May 9, 2007


This poem goes in syllables 4,3,5,4

Moonlight sparkles
in your eyes
like stars that twinkle
and hypnotize

sparkle and shine
beneath light
from stars above him
there is no fright

Shine down upon
his dark eyes
and lay before us
secrets and lies

Make him see that
i'm the one
who loves him more than
all of the sun

heaven's angel
from above
come down to earth to
teach us to love

Moonlight shining
upon face
a light from above
of heaven's grace

I see his face
in the clouds
and wonder what
you're doing now

Gone forever
from moonlight
hiding from the stars
hidden by night

I'll lay in bed
till night comes
thinking about you
as crickets hum

Moonlight sparkles
in his eyes
like stars that twinkle
and hypnotize

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  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    I REALLY enjoyed this one. Really great flow...

    Note: "Moonlight shining
    upon face"
    Shouldn't it say "upon his face"?

    Great job! 5/5

    Josie

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    You write a beautiful poem keep up the good work 5/5 Steve

  • 16 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    I love poetry about nature!!! This is aweome...

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    The flow was lovely.
    I thought this was a well penned peice.
    I loved it, and thought everyword was a great read. I just loved how it went so smoothly and was filled with emotions.
    Keep it up,
    Elainex

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem:) I really liked it. 5/5