Born into Darkness

by Soft Parade   May 9, 2007


My eyesights blurred
Words slurred
I'm struggling for breath
I'm near death...

Where is the light
That shines bright
Guiding the way
for souls each day

My body looks broken
with words unspoken
My love for Claire
My cherished affair

Memories flash
Violent crash
Last sight
Claire's alright

No sign of a gate
or a hellish fate
I'm a ghostly specter
bound by love for her

I try to communicate
with no way to mediate
Undeniably insane
I pass through her in vain

I'm falling from grace
As tears roll down her face
I'm dead now...
I try re-animate somehow

With tremendous pain
I can feel my still veins
Memory wears thin
My mind caves in

I open my eyes
To natures surprise
But somethings strange
My senses have new range

I'm losing all emotion
Claire begins to motion
She kisses my face
An awakening embrace

I can smell her blood
I can hear the thud thud
It is all too much
I fight her touch

She is scared now
I sense it somehow
I can taste her fear
The Reality is clear

My hunger cries
My soul dies
I pull Claire in
I lift up her chin

She is frozen still
with a sickly chill
I pierce her gently
but I drink plenty

As she lies in my arms
I feel no emotional alarms
She stares into my eyes
and dies...

by Barry Mac Court 2007

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  • 12 years ago

    by Half Husband Half father

    Well i've nvr wrote ny dark poems b4 but i realy loved ur poem evry thng is mving in flow lyk a river, so many emotion its scary too wat to say 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Cate Rock

    I loved this very scary but it paints a clear picture...was kinda confused yet I'm sure I'd understand a second time to read it. Vampire or ghost this deserves a 5+

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Im sorry that I couldnt just choose one part and analyze ( for being my favorite)...because this event which HONESTLY should be under sad poems...started to shake my heart with each new stanza..

    this is one of the deepest saddest poem to read from a gd period of time , for it been a while since I had tears while reading a poem..

    yet i believe its not the event..its ur word choice..my mother!u u just chose some words that are just perfect for the incident..

    I hope this is not a true story..cause u penned it with so much emotions..too deep not to be real

    5/5
    keep writing!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Bary, dead is dead hahaha well done
    ron

  • 16 years ago

    by why is life so miserable

    Wow so deep loveee it 5/5 cythia m. x]

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