by Laybelled with a name May 9, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
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And my mind is blank. |
by firexdancer
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Wow, this is an amazing poem... your style is so surprising...... the only thing wrong was your spelling, you misspelled lots of the words and it kinda sets the reader off a bit.. |
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This was... different. I liked it, but I'm sure I would have preferred it much more if you had used an actual structure. It just sort of seemed all over the place. |