Mirror

by The Pessimistic Peabody   May 9, 2007


Look into the mirror
what do you see?
Do you see the person
that you strive to be?

Do you see a friend
who shows everyone love?
Do you see a follower
of great god above?

Do you see a leader
who role models well?
Do you see a being
not afraid to fail?

Do you see a parent
filled with love and concern?
Do you see a child
that is anxious to learn?

Do you see a helper
of all those in need?
Do you see a soul
waiting to be freed?

Just take a look in the mirror
It is easy to do
Then tell me someday
what do you see in you?

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  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    This poem reminds me of my poem, mirror, mirror. which is also a popular poem as well as this one is. "Love is not a feeling, it is an ability" Nice write from Poetry Knight

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    WhOa!

    You wrote it so well. It seems like you inspired us readers. Great JoB! The beginning and the ending was pretty cool. You started off quite better then I thought.

    Great JoB!

    5.5

    *_* You deserve it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Oh cliche, but nicely worded and well put together. Sorry if I'm doing one-liners, I just don't have a lot to say, I suppose.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    I like how the poem flows

  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Hmmm soo true..
    nice work, i liked the flow to this poem and the intensity

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