It's Not Over {Double Kryielle Sonnet}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   May 9, 2007


This is about a guy who helps a girl with a broken heart and by luck, they fall in love.
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For good luck we'll smash this clover,
Hold your heart for it's not over.
When darkness strikes you're all alone,
For good luck [stop] throw the stone.

I'd lie -- say every thing's ok,
If only I could change the day.
Your white picket fence is alone,
For good luck [stop] we'll throw the stone.

For good luck we'll smash this clover,
For good luck [stop] we'll throw the stone.

Make a mistake and you're sure to lose,
Capture this heart and make it bruise.
Hold your heart for it's not over;
For good luck we'll smash this clover.

Cry to him; he won't make it right,
Cry to me and I will hold you tight.
In between us it's not over;
For good luck we'll smash this clover,

Make a mistake and you're sure to lose;
For good luck we'll smash this clover.

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AabB, ccbB, ddbB, AB -or- AbaB, cbcB, dbdB, AB.
Each line within the Kyrielle Sonnet consists of only eight syllables.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Amazingly well written, once again you have left me standing in awe. I loved the repeation in this poem, it really made it flow smoothly. I admire the fact that you write diffrent types of poety, it is diffcult sometimes to do new things. I love all your work, and the emtion in this si breath taking. Again excellent job 5/5