Gentle Breeze

by Brittany C   May 11, 2007


A gentle breeze
rustles the tall grass.
While little crickets sing
their interesting songs.

The fireflies dance
upon the breeze
lighting up the night,
like the stars above.

A gentle breeze
caresses one's body,
just to let know it's there.
So it can lighten your spirit.

Gentle breeze,
whistling through trees.
Entering open windows
to stay a little while.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Cares one's body,
    cares is ment perhaps to be caresses

    Well written, nice flow, beautiful imangery, greay word choice, simple yet clear emtion.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought it was beautiful and well written and the flow was great, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great write...baeutifully done!...excellent imagery too...kp writing!..5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    This was wonderful...I could see the imagery in my head and the words flowed nicely. *5/5*

    Alyson

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