Unforfilled Promises

by Mollie   May 11, 2007


I hold you close to my heart
yet you seem to slowly work me apart
two different souls we must be
our dreams are different you can see
your ideals do not match mine
what exactly do we hold in common
your hand I will hold in mine
and nothing is between us
yet its not the same as it used to be
this is not how we in-visioned us
what ever happened to you and me
we promised to work on trust
that promise has become lost
we promised to work on arguments
yet we always hold a difference
promises are left unfulfilled.
Where does that leave you and me?
its not only you
you can blame me too
but we need to both face it
we've done things we both regret
now its time to fix them.
I've stood still in an empty well
with my tears it will soon fill
I'm sick and I'm tired
and something seems wired
for our constant regression.
your a smart ass.
and I'm a hard ass
we both stand our ground.
now lets come together
try and remember
the unfulfilled promises.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    I agree with Kaila..
    and maybe make it into stanzas.
    makes it easier to read.
    i think it creates good images but maybe if you used better vocab. things would stick out better.
    i think for this being right on the spot its pretty good.. thanks for sharing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good
    The only thing to improve on
    is vocabulary make your words stand out a bit more