Hard good bye 2

by XxFallenxFromxGracexX   May 11, 2007


This poem is nearly exactly the same as hard goodbye i just changed a few lines so that it reflected a recent relationship i went through

You turned your back and walked away
not caring what i had to say
You see this tears caused by you
More fell from these eyes than you ever knew
You set me up to fall so hard
when i was with you i thought i could let down my guard
you made me feel like total s/h/i/t
Yet you never seemed to care a bit
You stole my once beating heart
and without caring tore it apart
i hate you for every single lie
so why was it so hard to say goodbye...

please rate and comment id really appreciated it

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  • 14 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    A powerful ending to a great poem. You began explaining how much you didn't like this person. How much they hurt you, how insensitive they were. And then ended it with a single sentence that contradicts your whole work. 5/5 Well Done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyndsy

    I really liked this one. It is written so well and it made me remember when I had to endure a relationship like that.

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