Rainbow (acrostic)

by Brittany C   May 11, 2007


Rain can come down hard
And the sun can be there
(to keep the clouds company)
In the end will be colors arching across the sky
(beautiful colors that never last long)
Nothing can compare to the transparent colors
Bending across the dark clouds in the sky
Over time it's colors may despair,
(going from bright to faded in such a short time)
Wow, rainbows are beautiful when there here.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    It was greatly written, very descriptive. I could picture the rainbow as I read it. The word choice was great and overall the poem was wonderful. Towards the end, though, it wasn't as good, it didn't seem nearly as significant as it did in the beginning, but all together it sounded right.

    Good job! 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Change "there here" to "they're here"
    I like the use of parenthesis in the poem, it adds something to an otherwise ordinary acrostic and doesn't disrupt the poem at all...
    You have good imagery, and I love how you have managed to describe rainbows in such a beautiful way. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Rainbows are such beautiful things.
    I love them.
    But I think you could've used more descriptive words through out the poem.
    It would've made the images stronger.

    Good work =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    Its nice to write about the beauty of nature. I liked it was enjoyable. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nice!
    I really enjoyed just a simple poem 4 a change
    Lately I've been asked to read novels pretty much
    so I enjoyed reading a short nature poem
    well done

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