Your crime

by Stephanie Naylor   May 11, 2007


Your Crime...
You said you loved me, i guess this is the way its meant to be.YOu hurt me and thats bad, when doing this you made me sad, and now i'm mad. You broke my heart, you ripped it and tore it apart. You broke a promise to me. I guess this is the way its meant to be.

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  • I know what its like to feel that way. you know that. i know you know what that feels like as well i can tell with how much emotion you put in this poem. it is very well written and the flow is just right. once again great work. please don't stop writing. i love the way you use the words to create your poetry. keep it up!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Quite cute in it's own way.. Liked the flow it was well written. I think I have read this piece by you before. Anyways well done on creating a short poem which held my interest.~mel