That was fantastic Nick =) 5 out of 5 like all your other ones =D You really are a great writer ^.^ lol I remember how I wrote at your age and still shudder just thinking about it xD
Great job,
Rhea

5/5 Sounds very sad and yet inspiring!

It was totally excellent and betifully penned
My fave lines should be;

The souls still seek out, the other soul adrift
Souls meant to be found, left lonely in time to sift
The end of all things sublime, divesting the universes wake
Can be saved, if the souls can combine and re-awake.

So cool and good description
Well done
Laura

Awesome poem Nick. I thought your descriptions of things in the poem were great. 5/5

I find it so amazing, that an 11 year old can write so deeply. And a boy at that.
Really, truly awesome.
You are thoroughly talented.
Keep writing for our sakes!!
5/5 No questions asked!

Wow..taht was really good! u use some really good wording! deff a 5/5 from me!

xo becca xo

Again, i thought this was a really great poem, wonderful write, with great flow and great vocab. keep up the good work great job.

Huh, nice poem i liked it heard about you from ChaoticBB.

Very nice! You've used some very good words in your poem. Go on like this!
Greetz,
Darah.

I came across this one poem..From the forums. It's such a good poem!! You have an amazing talent..I'm jealous! -.-
Please teach me how you rhyme so well =[.
These days I can't seem to make a decent poem.
xx Rox

Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5
I'll appreciate your comment and rating my poems

I added u to my favorite poets .. ^_^

This is very well written, the rhyme scheme is great, good images and a deepness to the meaning and message. I wish I'd written half as good as you do when I was your age!

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Nick - you really amaze me with the things that come out of your youthful mouth!! You're going to go far thats for sure. :)

Mo

xx

This is really deep .... i love it ... it really makes me feel as if its happening rite then and thier

Wow that's an awsome poem! It flows really good 5/5

Nick
this poem was very well written
The rhyming was right on
the flow was pretty good
and all together a good piece
nice job
5/5
love always
kaila

Ooh. i like it! very mystical. and deep! the only few things i dont love:
The souls still seek out, the other soul adrift
this makes no sense! you used 'the other' meaning in the first part you meant the one soul.. so it should be singular. i just dont like this line very much...

and here:
universes should be universe's

but great job. i think if you made it longer. it'd be fantasmagorical. =]

xox:Lauren

Really great and inspiring for someone so young its amazing.................wow

Nick- that was really amazing, it was somewhat sad but amazing. ur a really great writer. keep goin for wat u love!

kennedy

I liked tht... ur rele good!!!...