A Lost Soul

Really nice wording in this poem, exellent imagary given off. xxx alex xxx

I thought the title of this poem was very eye catching it almost makes the reader stop and check it out. The imagery in this piece was very good and I could see it play out in my head like a movie. Excellent job once again 5/5 GG23

"For I am like a ghost
Who sees but is never seen"

I loved that line that got me. i have to say i like ur style of writing your poems are structured great.

Keep up the good work.

Gary

"For I am like a ghost
Who sees but is never seen"

^^ My favourite part of this piece.
I found those two lines to hold so much power and meaning, they really stood out to me.

I enjoyed this, despite most of the piece not rhyming, I found it to have very good flow, and the ending was beautifully created, such passion and hope, while the writing itself was filled with such beauty and elegance.

Ahhh sad!!! but this one is really good. I think ur real talent though is in the rhyming poems, but this one was good as well!! :o]