Rusted Love

by KeyxMashingxParody   May 12, 2007


You take me far away,
To a place where I belong.
You write me random words,
And somehow turn them into a song.
Protecting me as I lay,
Watching me as I sleep.
Hugging me tight,
And kissing me sweet.

(Bridge)
Close into my heart...
Leave me fallen apart.

(Chorus)
You promise me,
You lie to me.
You loved it,
As we rouged it.
Falling downhill,
Losing our grip.
Leaving it all behind us....
This love was left to rust.

You kill me with silence,
And save me with tears.
Slowing breaking my heart,
Quickly urging my tears.
Tonight we fought again,
Tonight we died again.
Tonight we left it all,
Tonight our love will end...

(Bridge)
Close to my heart...
Leave me fallen apart.

(Chorus)
You promise me,
You lie to me.
You loved it,
As we rouged it.
Falling downhill,
Losing our grip.
Leaving it all behind us....
This love was left to rust!!!

(pause, guitar solo, mid.)

Leave me fallen apart...
Leave me fallen apart...
Leave my broken heart alone!!!

(Chorus)
You promise me,
You lie to me.
You loved it,
As we rouged it.
Falling downhill,
Losing our grip.
Leaving it all behind us...
Behind us... Behind us...
I'm left to rust...

-Liz-

(This is a "kinda short" song I wrote about how love always screws up with me, I'm terrible with relationships, and this song definitely shows it. Thanks if you read it! =])

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  • 16 years ago

    by stefanie

    I love this one. it kinda reminds me of myself and the relationship im dealing with. it was well written and nicely put together. great job. 5/5 for me

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    "You kill me with silence,
    And save me with tears.
    Slowing breaking my heart,
    Quickly urging my tears. "
    Lovely choice of words!!....beautifully penned peice!!...the opening stanza was Amazing!!..loved it!..kp up de good work!...
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Darrell

    Thank you for writing what i couldn't figure.. you're an inspiration.

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    You take me far away,
    To a place where I belong.
    You write me random words,
    And somehow turn them into a song.

    ^^^
    I effing LOVED those lines. I wish I had thought of them. >=[

    Anyways.

    I really liked it, espically that first bit. It set a tune in my head and most "lyrics" on here don't do that. Congrats. It seemed just a little cliche, but it's ok. =-]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I love this song. I don't know what else to say. I don't have any suggestions. I think it's perfect as it is.

    I can really picture this being a song, so I guess that's good. The chorus was definitely good, perhaps the best part of the song. =)

    Keep writing. Good job!

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