Serial Murder

by The Pessimistic Peabody   May 13, 2007


Murder...
is not just physical
Emotional murder
just as bad
Apathetic existence
just as sad
Alive....
breathing and moving too
Fatally wounded
cannot cope
Unresponsive to life
lost all hope
Eyes....
gazing without purpose
Mistaken for placidity
there is no peace
Heart beats out of habit
waiting to cease

Forever a lifeless shell
even as time continues
Another victim to a new breed of serial killer

Made for all those who are dead inside-

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  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    A common topic, but an original approach! I think this was written very cleverly. The rhythm was strange and musical -- overall a very good piece.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I liked it, the way you described that there is more than one type of murder was brilliant, i love the way your words melt together, nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by Kat

    I had to read it twice to fully understand it. There is so much in just one little poem. It seems to me like you put a lot of effort into this???? I really like it. Great job! 5/5

    ~Kat~

  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    Visually apathetic....
    but emotional like an undiscovered bodyfarm
    gets a HELL YEAH...from me...

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Loved this 1...very perfect filled wth deep emotions..n i loved the way u've ended it...very effective manner...n the flow was also good..kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

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