My Letter To You [Double Sedoka]

by aDORKable x3   May 13, 2007


My Letter To You
To tell you how much I care
One day, somehow, you will see

My Letter To You
Written by my steadied hand
Glazed with teardrops and heartaches

My Letter To You
Screams the words I cannot say:
"No matter what, I love you."

My Letter To You
I hope that you'll understand
How hard it is to tell you.

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The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    My Letter To You
    Written by my steadied hand
    Glazed with teardrops and heartaches

    My Letter To You
    Screams the words I cannot say:
    "No matter what, I love you."
    _____

    I loved those stanzas. This sedoka was great!! I tried writing one once...didn't work out quite as nice. Haha. Anywho, I loved it. It kinda reminded me of the one I wrote for your name. =] 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good sedoka ciao, love the way you made it, i give this one a 5/5!!!! keep them coming babe!!!!

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