Wow

by pixie   May 13, 2007


Wow this is boring

Wow no ones here

Wow this is a sad thing

Wow I shed one single tear

Now I'm flying

Now my moods dark

Now I'm crashing

Now my wrist has one big red mark

How do I live like this

How do I know

How would anyone ever miss

How could anyone love me so

Plow me into the ground

Plow me into the ground and watch me bleed

Plow me into it that hard because....

Wow I never knew that my life sucked this hard.

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  • 16 years ago

    by JaM

    Great work. Although you've been told it could be "fixed" I found it to be an amusing ending, how blunt and simple it was.

  • 16 years ago

    by azii

    Great one i loved it. You could just fix this one:

    Plow me into the ground

    Plow me and watch me bleed

    Plow me into it that hard because....
    .... I never knew that my life sucked this hard.

    Amazing poem. 5/5
    take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    I loved it but the end kinda seemed weird but its very good.. Great job...

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