Comments : Black Thorne

  • 16 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Really enjoyed this one
    i loved how you repeated that line in every other stanza "anger, lust, bitterness, and greed" it fortifies the poem

    awesome
    5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Black Angel Lloyd Rose

    Love it. it was well, it left me speechless. I love dark literature adn you definately embrace the shadow within. 5/5 kep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow that was excellent. The repitition of the one stanza worked really well. Everything about this is flawless, the flow reads smoothly, the rhyming doesn't seem forced at all, and the vocab is perfect. The vocab stood out the most to me. Well done. 5/5

    Tammie

  • 16 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    I will look up the wiccan site you mentioned. Love your poems, and that quote about the razor and the wicked twist, have to add you to my favourites, your a real talent
    Elisha

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Very strong passion great use of words this is an osm piece 5/5

    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is an amazing poem that exposes the darknes to the light of truth ...well written

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow, I am speechless. I really enjoyed reading this poem the vocabulary was amazing. Never seen something like this in my life!! xxxMuch love from Roxy Keep up the amazing work xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by shawn

    I love the way you worded the repetitive chorus type stanza, and the grammer was great, it's rare to find a peice overall that is as well writen as this. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Joseph K Apanian

    Very good.. well done.. keep up the good style

  • 16 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    It sounds like some badass metal song.