Reflection

by Aussie   May 15, 2007


I stand in front
of the mirror
in this empty
white room
i see a monster,
a know it all
with a violent tung

i step back with fright
once i see thee face
a face i thought i knew
how can this be?
am i insane?

the monster's face
was no one else, but mine
now there's no one else
to point my anger at

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  • 16 years ago

    by lonelynow

    "now there's no one else
    to point my anger at"

    i relate with this more than ever. good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    I really liked this poem, it reminded me of some of mine....niice job and I bet many can relate!

    Brooke<3

  • 16 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I really like the last stanza.
    good job x

  • 16 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    Originality, Format, Creativity< Key Ingredients To Excellence...And You've Definitely Mixed Them All Together To Create a Poem Of Perfection...I Liked It And I Look Forward To Reading More From You

    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Good job!
    Penned beautifully....
    Amazing write...great choice of words!
    Kp writing!
    xxPoojaxx

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