Ululations of an orphan

by Fsams   May 15, 2007


Like a flower I bloom
To bear young flowers
Hoping the world, a garden
A garden of lovers

But my first words wasn't "Mother"
Neither mother nor father
But only a question "Why?''
I'm cornered alone to die

Why are you treating me inhuman?
For I'm an innocent human?
Why do you separate me from this world?
For I was ordained to be born by God?

I feel as if I'm in solitary confinement
The world is a hell kind of envirinment
But do you ever think why?
Don't simply say you don't lie

I need refuge to survive
I need your love to be alive
Like you I too want to nurture
Like you I too want a future

Written by Fsams
13/06/04
21:04

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    This is a great message for the entire cosmo.
    I loved it.
    tc
    urs
    jiya

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    You put a lot of emotion into this one. Your rhyming wasn't forced at all. This poem is beautiful. I really liked that last line. It had a lot of power behind it. Amazing Job

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was an emotionally packed poem and the words were right on I enjoyed this piece alot keep up the great work Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Topic of this poem is great. It is very sad and you described emotions excellently. Some lines are amazing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    This poem was another one of my favorite of yours. I especially liked the lines

    "But my first words wasn't "Mother"
    Neither mother nor father
    But only a question "Why?''
    I'm cornered alone to die"

    and it also had a very powerfull ending. excellent job

    5/5