Can you be mine?

by Fsams   May 15, 2007


I have been hiding this in my heart
Eagerly waiting to start
But a big question stops me
Thinking how the outcome might be

You know you're a close pal of mine
And I need to accumulate the closeness
Then I would be on cloud nine
For you can only wipe off my loneliness

I know you know what I want
What I really want and don't
Never want to be estranged
But to be with you unchanged

Answer me or just give me a clue
Whatever it is, it must be true
Can you be mine or not?
I want you and I love you a lot

You can make me glad
You can make me sad
Just by telling a simple word
Yes or no from the bottom of your heart.

Written by Fsams
08/08/04
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  • 15 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Just by telling a simple word
    Yes or no from the bottom of your heart.

    I really enjoyed reaing this line. Overall it is wonderful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I really liked the ending in this poem. Strong emotions, excellent word choice, great flow, clear message again you have outdone yourself 5/5 although I believe you deserve more

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Wow what a beautiful ending. Keep writing dear. You are such a nice writer

  • 16 years ago

    by linda

    I love it :)

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