An Enchanted Place

by Joy   May 15, 2007


I'm sick of being here,
in this world with so much anxiety.
Filled with such cold and heartless people
and having to listen to so much arguments going on.

So won't you please. . . please take me away?
Take me away from this place.

I want you,
I want you to take my hand.
Then we can run forever on an endless road.
We'll visit all sorts of places,
we'll see beauty inside and out.

Everything I'll hear will be music to my ears.
We'll chase butterflies and laugh.
I'll fall down, and you'll be the one to catch me.

Wherever this place may be,
a place to run away from your troubles...
a place where nothing goes wrong...
a place to free your mind...

is the place I long for.. with you...

(AUTHORS NOTE: I know, it doesn't rhyme like my usual poems do. But please PLEASE leave a comment! I really want to know what you guys think about this one, it 100% came from the heart. Anything I can improve? Thank you.. please leave a comment :) )

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  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabetta

    I think this poem is great. You said something about it not rhyming? A poem doesnt have to rhyme to be great, this poem has meaning, and that's what makes it great. Great job, 5/5 :)

    ~Lizzie~