Useless

by BreeAnna   May 16, 2007


I feel weak all the time,
I can hardly breathe,
When I see you walk in,
My first instinct is to leave.

I try to act tough,
and push the feelings away,
but I cant fight it much longer,
and you made it this way.

When you smile I get butterflies,
and my heart speeds up a bit,
I am confused about you constantly,
I just want to quit.

I will not fall again this time,
I have finally had enough,
but seeing you everyday,
makes my decision really tough.

This feeling inside burns,
although at times it can be quite nice,
but how can I be certain now,
when nothing is turning out right.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chad Picard

    Wow... all your poems are great! Read together, they I felt as though you wrote each as part of a greater whole. Is this the case?

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I understand where you are coming from on this one. It's tough, keep up the wonderful writing:) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rach

    I think you did a great job on this, its something alot of peopel will be able to relate to, good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    Well written...5

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Try to stay away from pronouns.
    They usually mess up the flow of writing.
    It seems like an added ingredient
    That doesn't need to be there.
    If you erase it... It'd look like.

    feel weak all the time,
    can hardly breathe,
    When I see you walk in,
    first instinct is to leave.

    I thought that just sounded better.
    Hope it's just not me, though.

    I just want to quit.
    That seemed really forced to me.

    All in all, it was okay.
    It wasn't the best I've read in here.
    Also wasn't the worst.
    I give you a 4 m'dear :]

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