Cool descriptions of the natural raining process. well penned.

Nicely done =)! It's raining right now over here.. xD lol.. just a little random fact ^^ well, keep up your good writing!
xxx

That was amazing and now everytime it rains i going to think of this poem its just that good i really love it! flow and everything just worked for me so you got a 5/5!!

Wow...Such Imagery....Straight Up Awesome Poem =D...5/5

I like this one a lot. It's the first one I read, so I've not much to compare it to. The flow was strange to me, but it seemed to be done on purpose. Which is good. 5/5

Beautifully written poem. You created truly wonderful imagery through it.
"The world becomes dark
The sky begins to spark
The clouds start to fight
Sending us sparkling light"
^ I really like this stanza.

Great imagery so very vivid your words were descriptive and powerful giving an overall stunning picture painted into mind. Different flow. Really unique. I found this piece to be really adorable to tell you the truth. Sweet. Well done. keep up the great work.~mel

WOW! Great descriptions and flow. You have a talent of analyzing things sometimes people overlook and its definetly refreshing! Great Job! 5/5

I have often wanted to write a poem about rain but have never really known how to go about it. you captured it quite well. and i like how you begin with rain only coming at a drizzle and how the poem continues the rain gets heavier and then ending with the sun creeping out adds such a nice touch. I see many poems start happy and end depressing but i like how yours is the reverse. much better feeling at the end. well done xoxo

This great u can really express what happens when it rains 5/5.

Very descriptive and excellent imagery! I could picture the scenery in my mind. the words were so beautifully thought out, it was an outstanding piece!

5/5

A lot of the rhymes here were simple but, the words surrounding them were nicely penned. 5/5

marcella

Very wellwritten you sure do have a way with words:D
keep up the gr8 work
hope to read mroe like it soon!
tk care
bree

Its a beautiful and an amazing poem...

Luzan and Nazeer

I liked how it started off very suttle and then turned into a storm kind of thing. I think I'm going to try something like this. I'll give it a four.

Here begins a drizzle
[[Here {it} begins. I think would sound better.]]

Now this is a poem. It had description and I could feel your appreciation for the rain. Speak like this throughout all your poems.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Great poem.
Very discriptive with a great flow and rhyming.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Your work is great.
Take care

Wow...
Another Great Poem By You!! lol =]]
That was soo Imagery...
Very Beautiful.. =]]

Rhyming is great. Imagery is excellent. You described rain beautifully. First stanza is my favorite one. 5/5

Cute, it wasn't as descriptive as I know you can make it, but it was cute. Good job.