Dreamer

by FallenAngel   May 16, 2007


Trapped in a corner, my dreams still breath
They scream my name, untouched,they bleed
Can't turn back now,its too late,
His careless hand has written my fate.
I pray,give me one more chance,
I'l turn back time,make up for my mistakes..
He laughs you can't do that child.
now there's too much at stake.
I see their faces, straining to take one look at me,
Here's the Sinner, someone you don't want to be
Rise my beloveds, Crucify me
at last my soul will be free
Cloaked in honeyed darkness,
you are stuck in your hive,
Kill this Dreamer,
you'l prove she was Alive.

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  • 16 years ago

    by bacha

    Very good one for real :):):) I loved it very much:)))

    keep it up:)))
    I will give ya 5/5 :))

    khuloodan:))
    smile all the time:))

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, well done, excellently written poem. Superb imagery.
    I like the ending, so powerful poem, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    His careless hand has written my fate.
    and
    "Rise my Beloved,Crucify me"
    ^^My favourite lines...very powerful and great choice of words too
    Bhawna...Great work my frend..kp it up!!.....this peice is depressing though yet well penned!..5/5!!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow, very depressing, i can feel the pain of the poem, really nice description and flow. 5/5 hope you read one of mine.

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