The Darkness Within

by Jacob   May 17, 2007


Darkness flows from my soul...
Through my life I've paid the toll...
For the deeds of those undone...
I might have done right...
In the life of those with fun...
They never had to feel the bite...
Of those that where in the fight...
I wish I could flee...
From those who have beseeched me...
In darkness I lie...
Till my dieing days...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    <3<3
    loved it !!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hello hello thanks u for your lovely comment!! :D

    i thought this was really well done mate. u probably did it on purpose and im probably sum silly chick 4 mentioning it but try not to have a rhyme to start off with and then no rhyme in the next bit... but again u probably hav a reason ;)

    so i really enjoyed it and that's my only comment darl!

    keep it up!!!

    luv ruthie

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