The Noise...

by Jacob   May 26, 2007


Can you hear it?
It's all around you...
The noise that u hear...
It makes you shed a tear...
The yelling...
The fighting...
It makes you want to run...
You know there is no fun...
You see the kids crying...
They might be dying ...
Why can't it stop?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    Not your best, but I still like it. Perhaps instead of "It makes you shed a tear..." you could've said "It fills you full of fear." I, personally, just think it works better with the poem. Keep 'em coming!

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