The Beast.

by Krzysztof J   May 17, 2007


A majestic beast,
With yellow eyes,
It's hide is jet black,
At night it strides.

It bares it's teeth,
A gentle growl,
Is all you'll hear,
Before the pounce.

This thing from hell,
It's features raw,
It craves for blood,
It craves the gore.

The beast is cunning,
It can't be killed
Hell's pure wrath.
Burns within.

How can you fight,
What you can't see,
So be afraid,
The beasts in me.

**We all must control that which is inside us, the beast can never be killed but it can be controlled**

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  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    I very much enjoy this dark poem, it reminds me of the book of revelation in the bible. btw just to comment on a comment u made in one of reborn's poems, there is nothing u can do to make God love u more, and there is nothing u can do to make God love u less. He along with all his angels are always listening.

  • 16 years ago

    by reborn

    Same critic as for the mission. good story and really liked the end!!! the beast is actually within u. for the surprise ending and philosophic subject that it brings that's at least a 4/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    Wow, a wicked dark poem!!
    I love it.
    I totally get what you are saying with it. Everyone has 'the beast' in them.
    Most of the time its MY OWN which scares me. Dont realise im capable of some things till they are done.
    This is a tremedous poem. Deserves nothing less than 5/5!

    Kelly
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    I like the metaphor that you have created with this poem. The flow is good.

    Regards,

    Steven

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!.love thsi 1...well penned dark poem..lol...n it's soo true.......lol...i like d the description n the way u used "Beast"...great work...powerful...n true!
    Kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

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