by firexdancer May 18, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
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I know i might be weak, |
by Nix
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Greatly written piece. I like second stanza the most. It shoves emotions very well, 5/5. |
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I liked this a lot. 5/5 -T. Jane |
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I liked the repetition in the first line of your stanzas they really came across well. It strongly boosted the flow of your poem. |
by Brittany C
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I really liked this one. It has a very nice flow and wonderful word choice. I gave in a 5/5. |
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Briant write, great flow and volcabulary was excellent , i loved it ,great poem: I know sometimes i cry, |