Nice Guy

by kolorful   May 18, 2007


Always nice to other people
Never speaking up
Just simple Mister Nice Guy

Always cheering up his friends
Whenever they need his help
Just simple Mister Nice Guy

Noone ever thinks of him
He's just supposed to solve his own problems
Just simple Mister Nice Guy

He never expected to see his girlfriend killed
Right before his very eyes
Just simple Mister Nice Guy

He pursues the killer
With severe hatred
Just simple Mister Nice Guy

He busts down the killer's door
Butcher knife in hand
You can see the loathing in his eyes
No more Mister Nice Guy

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Great poem.I loved how you repeated the line "Mister nice guy".I also liked the ending very dramatic and a great way to end this poem.A definate(sp?) 5/5 from me.
    Keep up the great work,
    Miranda

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    That was rlly good!!... i enjoyed reading it, and the part with his gf dying came suddenly... great emotion.. 5/5 from me, and thanks so much for the comment.. it means a lot

  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    I know it's not meant to be humourous, but I kinda found it funny. Great job though!!!!! 5/5

    Josie

  • 16 years ago

    by memyselfandI

    Good poem, i really liked it. keep it up

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