Crash Landing

by Rami   May 19, 2007


You let me fall.
Did you care?
Any at all?

You cut my rope,
and pushed me down.
Diving below
Breaking the ground.

I trusted you.
To hold on tight.
You said to climb up.
That you would stay all night.

But when I believed,
That you were going to stay,
You told me it wasn't enough.
And decided to throw me away.

So I lay on a couch,
Barely alive,
Laying face down
While a friend pulls out knives.

Like the knife you used,
To cut my rope.
You were supposed to save me.
Supposed to be my hope.

Even though you let me fall,
I would go again,
Just so i could tell you
I will love you until my end.

I couldn't help
Falling in love,
but before I crash heres a message,
Hey fox, Thanks for the shove.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    Really well written.

    keep up the good work:)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sasha

    Nicley written

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I know what you mean I can relate more than well, its hard, description, transition and words were great 5/5 maybe u can read oneo f mine.