The Deceased (Collab)

by Wallace   May 19, 2007


I have a friend who is deceased
It was a most unfortunate event
When she died my sadness was unleashed
And I was consumed in pain and torment

My heart was broken
I felt so alone
For depression had spoken
And all I see is her tombstone

My days are filled with tears
And I am forever distressed
Eventually these days turned to years
Ad I'm still tangled in this mess

I've cried a thousand times
I can't seem to find any peace
But in hope I search to find
My friend who is deceased

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don;t like the ending but this poem is still great. Topic is good and you created touching atmosphere. Very emotional piece... It deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    Really deep and sad...
    you're a very good writer, i must say..=)
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    Great poem
    love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent poem who did u collab with on this one u should leave a link to their profile so people can comment on it for that person also.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "I have a friend who is deceased
    It was a most unfortunate event
    When she died my sadness was unleashed
    And I was consumed in pain and torment"

    The opening immediantly caught my attention as it's something i can relate to with all my heart
    My poem, 'angels' (one of my first) was along the same lines of this
    An excellent collab
    5/5
    *Gem*

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