Wonderful

This is great I feel like I can see the kid and see what she's going through.. I feel for her and I wish I can save her.. This is reallly good

Excellently done :)
i loved it. great work. 5 on 5 :)
keep up :)

Really love this, very moving

Such a powerful and moving poem.Im not sure the subject is taken from personal experience or not but,it moved me.Thanks for sharing. 'Nobodies child falling fast through the cracks.Precious time lost can never get back' These lines particuraly stood out in your poem. Thanks for sharing.

This is so... Sad and great at the same time..

This is beautifully written...it really hits home. Working in the field of social work I see this scenerio far too often and it breaks my heart every time. Great job!

I love this poem it is so cute it reminds me of my past

This is so powerful. I love it.

This is so powerful. I love it.

Wow. Great job. Very touching.

How I wish... loving can be search as easy as writting poems like this....

I love this. Beautiful x

This will hit home to all those children, now adults who were 'Nobody's children'.

Excellent write.

A moving piece indeed. Well written

A really really moving piece.

A really really moving piece.

A really really moving piece.

Moving ....

What a beautiful poem, really lovely story, great rhyming and a happy ending