A promise

by lory   May 21, 2007


Only a few reasons why i love you
are what i have to give
reasons that our hearts have met
reasons why i want to live
i want to peak into your soul
to see the love you have in there
i want to be the love in your heart
i want us to be together every where
countless as the stars all the reasons
i can see there is nothing quite as beautiful
as you and me
so the reasons do remain within my heart
concealed,
waiting for you to unlock the door so that
they may be revealed
so a reason today and a promise
th reason is......i love you
the promise is....i always will.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darlena

    Great poem. I loved it. Keep up the great writing.

    Feel free to cum and check out my poems whenever u get the chance. thanx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Hey it was nice but the real good was the last line wil remember it for life surely but you have used the world reason and heart too often keep to avoid repeat rest all awesome love it.5 for it and ya do comment and vote mine and am also lookin for cool friends may be we can be .

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Hey it was nice but the real good was the last line wil remember it for life surely but you have used the world reason and heart too often keep to avoid repeat rest all awesome love it.5 for it and ya do comment and vote mine and am also lookin for cool friends may be we can be .

  • 18 years ago

    by xx Ali xx

    This poem is deep and i love it..keep writing :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Rach

    Aww this is such a cute poem, well done. you must really love someone special a lot :) 5/5

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