Another lonely girl

by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   May 21, 2007


Fallen captive in hurt and strife
Breathing shallow breathes of life
Holding on tightly to what could be
Keeping close the thought of you and me
Crimson rivers flow from my veins
Invisible fears fall from my hazel eyes

Closing the door
Holding the pain
Covered in grief
Layered in shame

I cant let myself be the one to blame
Fears unknown held dear to my heart
Secrets held bound from the start
Many unspoken words I want to share
Many of those words answer my prayers

How do I open up
How do I move on
To start again
My knife and a stone

These pains are all mine
You didnt take them away
You hold me captive
Between a rock and a hard place
Not knowing how to open up
Another lonely girl empties her cup

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla Kay

    Great poem.I feel like you wrote a poem of my life.lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    Damn... You really got talent there aye! 10/10... Very moving... deep... and well written. Keep it up ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by dawn green

    Very nice write! keep up the good work!
    good bless

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wonderful write, with great word choice. I loved the way this flowed and the emotion it had within.

    The word, "didnt" in this line, "You didnt take them away" should be changed to, "didn't"

    Also, I felt the poem would be stronger if you had puncuation through out.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Omg! thats really sad. i love it 5/5

    xo kisses xo