Lets Paint A Picture. Part I

by hippiehxc   May 21, 2007


Lets paint a picture
Of you and I
But Lets Pretend
That you're still alive

Lets relive the night
That shot was fired
Lets pour our hearts out onto paper
Until we get tired

You were in love with her
And I was in love with him
But we were in love with each other
..The sweetest sin..

I told you we weren't meant to be
We got into an explosive fight
You said you couldn't take the pain anymore;
That hour a young angel took flight

You took the gun in your hands
With the thought of my words burning in your head
You pulled the trigger
And lay there dead

Sticks and stones may break your bones
But words can surely kill
I just wish I could take everything back
I hope your heart has healed

So lets paint a picture
Of me and you
Look at it closely
And you'll see that I died from a broken heart too

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    This is an outstanding poem! the emotion portrayed is clear and heartshattering. i dont think i could deal with that situation i'd probably completely fall apart and give up. anyways 5/5 amazing work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Wow, that would kill me if someone I loved did that mess....urrrr... This poem is great...5/5...I have poems too..

  • 16 years ago

    by JodiieBaybeh

    The 5th and last sections was my fave definatly a 5/5 i like your work :) xx