I do(n't) want him near me

Lovely..i liked it..the title was the best :D..plz keep writing!!

I was looking for a poem to read and the title of this one really caught my eye. Really clever idea, I like the repetition of the "I do/don't want him near me." Very effective.

Em xXx

Sad in the beginning, happy in the end.
Nice written.
Well done

Great poem, excellently written. I like the twist in the end. Really good flow. 5/5

Awww.. it was so sad at first but had a nice ending. Even though it was short, I personally liked it. It was very good and I love the rhythem of the poem. Great job, keep it up!! 5/5 <3

~Loveless Nights~