Have You Ever...?

by MaSkEdSoUl   May 22, 2007


**Don't know if this is in the right category**

Have you ever felt thirsty,
Like you haven't drank for days?

Have you ever felt alone,
Even though people are near?

Have you ever missed someone,
Even though they're right next to you?

Have you ever felt ignored, dishonest
And just not there?

Everyones felt them,
Even if its just once.

There people that feel them everyday
And there people that just...don't feel at all.

**Just a random poem, came out of nowhere lol. Hope you enjoyed readin it**

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  • 16 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Everyones = Everyone's

    if its = if It's

    There people = They're people

    Not a good poem at all, to be honest with you. Yes, it is under the right section, but your poem didn't get in touch whatsoever with any emotional aspect of me. I didn't find this poem attractive.... and being such a short poem it needs to be hard-hitting right off the bat. This is wasn't.
    Your word use wasn't that intricate either, and I didn't find anything spectacular. To keep your 2 votes of 5.0 I will refrain from voting, but just to let you know I would not have rated this well at all.

    I'm sorry for such a harsh comment, but it's the truth. Make your poems more touching, more emotional, more honest. This poem just... didn't hit the spot. Maybe it's just me.

    not 5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    ...Yes, I have.

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