That Old Photograph

I love your poem.it's sad. time past n nevr back: (

Try not to use because.
I think it ruins the fow a little bit.
At least in my mind it does...

I don't think this was one of your best.
To many people, it may be.
But for me, I don't like it as much.
I didn't find a tune for this poem.
I usually do.
Not as great as the Venus Fly Trap
But I usually DO find one.
I refuse to rate this poem.
I don't want to give you a low grade :]

You reflected the truth on this poem..and my mum tells it too..There were no danger at all
See..how world is changing and getting uglier every single say
These lines really made me amazed with explanations;

That old photograph;
Brings back the feeling of comfort -
It was a time when happiness bloomed,
Youth was flourished right around their...

Well done,
Laura

It's funny how we look at old photo's and realize how far we've come since then, just how different our lives have become. I liked this poem a lot because I think everybody can relate to it. The imagery was also great, nicely done 5/5