End of day

by rene   May 22, 2007


Why must it be
that my doings come so wrong
why must it be
that my actions crash and fall

i try and try
and all I do is fail
I try and try
and all they do is yell

what should i do
to end these fights
what should i do
so i can sleep at night

I try and try
to make them pleased
I try and try
to make my pain ease

but no matter what i do
I cant seem to get away
no matter what I do
I fail at end of day

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  • 16 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    It says so much and it was well thought out, I like the style you used with the same lines, Im a fan of that style myself. the flow was pretty good also, Im going to read your poems with 0 comments and comment you ion them to fill the gaps :)