You took my life, I'll take the pain

by Lost IN a RIVER of Tears   May 22, 2007


I slit my wrest, I start to cry
The pain so real, I dont know why.
This becomes a daily thing
No friends, No family what else to do
Not many tears will fall though
Once, Twice, I'll do it again
You took my life, I take the pain
Scares are everywhere
People ask and I just lie.
This thing I do every night
Helps me over come the day I have
I pray to god that I may stop
Its all your fault
You left without good bye
You think I do this because I like it
It brings so much pain
The tears use to fill my close
But I got used to it so tears barely fall..
Once, twice, I'll do it again
You took my life, I'll take the pain

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  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    This poem is full of emotion..i enjoyed reading it...great job!=]

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Ending is very effective. You could write this poem in stanzas. I like some lines very much.

  • 16 years ago

    by Life Is Beautiful

    Great job! know how you feel

    sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    Aww sad but ace! liking the title line too. liking in general =]

    Matt x