Comments : Best friends. [acrostic]

  • 16 years ago

    by patrick smith

    I actually signed for the first time in over a year leese :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, very well written. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 16 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    I like this poem, i can really relate to were you coming from too. I like the opening line to, very cool.
    peace

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    WOW!!...beautiul poem...excellently penned the meaning of best friends
    I like the usage of words in this one..n this acrostic is beautifully penned..
    Good work!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wooww. This was really good hunny. Actually, I think I'm going to add you to my favourite'ss. I loved your use of vocabulary in this it really brought out what you were trying to say. The flow was good and the descriptions were filled with great imagery. Lovely job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Wow.
    You're pretty darned good in acrostics.

    First stanza?
    Wonderful.

    I found this to be quite hillarious.
    I conquer with you whole heartedly, my dear.
    It's quite endearing that someone else thinks like me.
    It's sweet as well.
    I love this poem.
    5/5 ?

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    a beautiful poem, I dont really like acrostic poems but this one is the best I've ever read. I thought it was quite funny an I love the last 2 lines:

    Disowned rejects return to the betraying friend.
    Sweetie, this is what they call friendship

    keep up the good work! 5/5
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    I loved this poem... the wording captured the whole thing, it was perfect. the different view of best friend was great! thanks for the comment btw. i'll go find a way to flow the last two lines. if you have any input on how to, please help.

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    LOVE IT! i love how compleatly unexpected the portrayal of best friends was, and how the title gave no hint of it. wonderful!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    This a good poem, i love the way you use your words. My favorite part was: "Sweetie, this is what they call friendship." I just love that line...5/5 Keep it up girl!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Beautiful Acrostic you have hear! I like the word created in this amazing poem! well done word choice is good! XD 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    -=Steals some of Lee-sah's talent!=- Gosh, babe. You're an amazing poet, don't ever believe otherwise. That was an amazing acrostic. I loved all the words you chose. It was just that great, Sweetie. xxxx
    Take care, love.
    5/5
    -Heater

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Such a deep friendship poem, not at all what I had expected, the flow was great, the word choice was amazing, and the emtion was strong. You did an excellent job here, really 5/5 even though I wish i could give you more

  • 16 years ago

    by XxWorthlessxX

    Lisa, this is a veryy good poem. I loves it. You are an amazing writer. Strong emotion and gret use of words. Excellent job. 5/5

    `-jackie.

  • 16 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    Very nice poem! I like it a lot! Love your word choice... you are a very talented writer!!

    Molly

  • 16 years ago

    by stacyneedsyou x3

    I absolutely love it.
    lots of big words, hard for me to understand.
    but i read it through a couple times and understood it.

    fantastic work.
    keep it up!