Forgetting Is The Hardest Part.

by SmileeItsBritt   May 23, 2007


It doesn't matter if your heart breaks
They don't even know you're there,
It doesn't matter if you're shattered,
Or If you've forgotten to care.

Because the lies all crash down on you now,
you can't act like you're happy anymore,
You're hurt beyond repair tonight
Just leave, walk out that door.

The pain it's all too much to take,
Try to run away from yourself,
You say that goal is too unreachable,
But impossible is what you do so well.

Drown everything you used to be,
What used to shine out of your eyes,
Let this hurt over come it.
and finally let down your disguise.

terrible, but its me venting, i needed it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashlie

    I like the way you formatted this poem..its a great poem..it kept we reading and it kept me interested...i like how it really relates to alot of things people go through...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    Its not terrible ,it was very well done.I felt the emotion ,and like me it seems you write to let things out.

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow, that is very strong. Lots of emotion.
    Great job. You have a true passion.
    Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Life Is Beautiful

    I agree....i loved this, and venting always helps. good job!

    Sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Ahh... yep. I have those times... those times where you just have to write or you feel like your going to explode with intense emotions.... For just venting, this poem was truly wonderful. It was emotional & powerful. Fabulous job, keep writing! 5.5 =)

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

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