I'm Not the One

by BrokenREALiTy   May 23, 2007


You see, there's this boy,
Who I love and can't deny.
The two of us are perfect,
With no question asking why.

He loves me and I love him,
The two of us are whole.
Completing each other entirely,
Sharing each others' soul.

I get a kick out of seeing him,
And being in his arms.
And despite how much we fight,
He wins me with his charms.

Most people think we'll last,
Though we're innocent and young.
Our love story's being written,
As our song remains unsung.

But despite how much it works,
And how well we fit together.
I feel that there is something missing,
That we won't last forever.

So here's to you, babe,
One last declaration of love.
Always know what I feel for you,
And that you're all I'm thinking of.

Because I realized a long time ago,
That you deserved so much more.
Which is why I'm leaving you today;
I'm not what you're looking for.
[c] 2O07 Mindy Huang

* Something I wanted to tell my ex from almost a year ago but couldn't find the words to do so ...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Another great piece of work! and i bet that was hard realizing u werent the one!

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful! I loved the beginning, how you described such a sweet and innocent love, it was very refreshing. And then I enjoyed the dark side of it also and the last sentence was just wow. The poem altogether was a joy. Well done you are truly talented and are going into my favorites *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    That's beautiful. Great rhythm and the way you put the words together was good.
    5/5
    .x

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    The flow was kinda rough but still a great piece words come out and speak to ppl and that is an amazing talent

    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    The mystery was all over the poem..but you shouldn't give up fight,ng in life to have what you want..the flow of it was liquidy and the punctuation was well
    Good job,
    Laura